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In my short analysis I think I need to work on getting my point across when it comes to my research question. I think I need to work on my examples as well as my categories, how I broke them down. It took some time to analyze each excerpt, for me it was more than once. Over all I think my question can be supported by the information provided in the chat room transcript. I do think I can work on organization and categories to be more focused.

In light of our class, I would need to work on formulating a better research question because I didn't feel confident with mine for the short analysis. I  would also need to work on the organization of the analysis as well as for my research project. As for my research project, I need to work on my interview questions so it won't be mechanical, I want it to have a flow between my subject and I. I also think I would need to work on the introduction, research question, organization and presenting my data.